The book "Boot Camp" is about a boy named Garrett. Garrett is a boy who is has a deciduous attitude. He doesn't know why he is sent there but he knows that his life was antebellum. Now it is the opposite. Garrett is forced to eat unbareable food and he offtend gets beat up. Garrett gets abstemious and can bearly take it until he hears of an escape plan. Can this plan help him escape, or will irony strick his life again?
You might want to rethink the words "deciduous" and "antebellum." They don't quite fit.
ReplyDeleteAlso, do you think mentioning the escape might give too much away for the reader? After all, it does come very close to the end.
Just thoughts...